Comments on: My nine year old sister wrote this story, is it good? http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good Sat, 06 Feb 2010 06:16:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: jbfan30032 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1263 jbfan30032 Wed, 09 Sep 2009 10:04:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1263 That was a good story please answer mine??? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Al1cGtH0OUhg16HdJtDJU67sy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090212095650AAhJXTt<br><b>References : </b><br> That was a good story please answer mine???

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]]> By: listen to me =] http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1262 listen to me =] Wed, 09 Sep 2009 09:15:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1262 i read about 2 lines and got friken bored<br><b>References : </b><br> i read about 2 lines and got friken bored
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]]> By: StarGirl http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1261 StarGirl Wed, 09 Sep 2009 08:43:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1261 good show, old chap! p.s. the jonas brothers suck<br><b>References : </b><br> good show, old chap!

p.s. the jonas brothers suck
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]]> By: Heather T http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1260 Heather T Wed, 09 Sep 2009 08:09:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1260 i actually read IT ALL!!!!!! it is a really good story for a nine year old good gammer and a good story i would be really proud(:<br><b>References : </b><br>help me with my teasing my boyfriend question pleaseee? i actually read IT ALL!!!!!!
it is a really good story for a nine year old good gammer and a good story
i would be really proud(:
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help me with my teasing my boyfriend question pleaseee?

]]> By: criss.dead http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1259 criss.dead Wed, 09 Sep 2009 07:33:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1259 Very well I must say. She needs to work on her sentence fragments and spelling though.<br><b>References : </b><br> Very well I must say. She needs to work on her sentence fragments and spelling though.
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]]> By: Kristina! http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1258 Kristina! Wed, 09 Sep 2009 07:15:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1258 i really enjoyed reading it (: answer mines!!! http://nz.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090213142225AAnT9sp<br><b>References : </b><br> i really enjoyed reading it
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answer mines!!!
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]]> By: koolkid http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1257 koolkid Wed, 09 Sep 2009 06:26:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1257 i stopped after head i dont read stuff that has to do with BLOWWwjjOBsz<br><b>References : </b><br> i stopped after head
i dont read stuff that has to do with BLOWWwjjOBsz
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]]> By: Obsessed~With~Twilight http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1256 Obsessed~With~Twilight Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:56:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1256 it was definitely ok for a nine year old.<br><b>References : </b><br> it was definitely ok for a nine year old.
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]]> By: Ashton D http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1255 Ashton D Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:48:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1255 It's way cute! Just an idea: I bet you could help her put together a children's book. I bet she's have fun drawing/or picking out the pictures for the book... and make it a short story or something. 2nd-5th graders really like those type of books, and pictures make it that much better! Tell her to keep writing!<br><b>References : </b><br>I write for hobby/stress relief, I teach Sunday School for kids age 7-10, and my mom teaches elementary. A mix! It’s way cute!

Just an idea: I bet you could help her put together a children’s book. I bet she’s have fun drawing/or picking out the pictures for the book… and make it a short story or something. 2nd-5th graders really like those type of books, and pictures make it that much better!

Tell her to keep writing!
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I write for hobby/stress relief, I teach Sunday School for kids age 7-10, and my mom teaches elementary. A mix!

]]> By: forkintheroad http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good/comment-page-1#comment-1254 forkintheroad Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:16:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/summer-camps-ocean/my-nine-year-old-sister-wrote-this-story-is-it-good#comment-1254 Encourage her to write. It's pretty good, but not exceptional for nine years old. Let her know that her sentences are too short.<br><b>References : </b><br> Encourage her to write. It’s pretty good, but not exceptional for nine years old. Let her know that her sentences are too short.
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