Comments on: Can i get you opinion on my English story assignment? http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment Sat, 06 Feb 2010 06:16:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Confused Girl http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment/comment-page-1#comment-1468 Confused Girl Thu, 17 Sep 2009 06:19:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment#comment-1468 Shut your mouth "Miss-Behaviour" This story is damn Awesome!! and the writer is very talented!! If u can't see that you must be blind or speak a different language! Good on ya Michael, Keep writing! This story is really good! xxx<br><b>References : </b><br> Shut your mouth "Miss-Behaviour"
This story is damn Awesome!!
and the writer is very talented!!
If u can’t see that you must be blind or speak a different language!
Good on ya Michael, Keep writing! This story is really good!
xxx
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]]> By: strawberrycake http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment/comment-page-1#comment-1467 strawberrycake Thu, 17 Sep 2009 05:29:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment#comment-1467 I think it is quite good, I like the ending part it feels mysterious. (What actually is your topic?)<br><b>References : </b><br> I think it is quite good, I like the ending part it feels mysterious. (What actually is your topic?)
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]]> By: MissBehavior http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment/comment-page-1#comment-1466 MissBehavior Thu, 17 Sep 2009 05:19:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment#comment-1466 Sorry, but this is kind of boring. A story has a conflict between characters, against himself, god or nature. It starts to build towards a major conflict and then flows down to a resolution. The characters part is quite important. What you have written is not a story, but a flow of consciousness. It would be better as a poem, except that isn't very interesting. It is though you are having a personal angst, but don't call it a story.<br><b>References : </b><br> Sorry, but this is kind of boring. A story has a conflict between characters, against himself, god or nature. It starts to build towards a major conflict and then flows down to a resolution. The characters part is quite important.

What you have written is not a story, but a flow of consciousness. It would be better as a poem, except that isn’t very interesting. It is though you are having a personal angst, but don’t call it a story.
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]]> By: Jo http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment/comment-page-1#comment-1465 Jo Thu, 17 Sep 2009 04:38:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment#comment-1465 Spell check is your best friend. Interesting idea, but grammar and spelling kill the story.<br><b>References : </b><br> Spell check is your best friend. Interesting idea, but grammar and spelling kill the story.
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]]> By: Philipjfry http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment/comment-page-1#comment-1464 Philipjfry Thu, 17 Sep 2009 04:32:59 +0000 http://www.justinandshannon.com/ocean-side-camp/can-i-get-you-opinion-on-my-english-story-assignment#comment-1464 OMG THE SUSPENSE!?! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT?<br><b>References : </b><br> OMG THE SUSPENSE!?! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT?
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