Tell me about yourself question how does this sound?

September 10th, 2009 | by admin |

This is my tell me about yourself answer for a taco bell job fair interview. Can you tell me what you think, any stuff I left out or any advice you can give me to make it better. What do you think I should put in here to make it stand out from all the other people.

I’m going to be a senior at Bakersfield High School. I have good grades, great attendance and I am always on time. In the work world I am a responsible hard-worker, i’m always up for a challenge and I like to get my work done. I enjoy taking on new projects and always give 100%. I work my best while working as a team. The most work experience I’ve had outside my house is babysitting however, this job has proven how patient I am with people because the 3 kids I watch have adhd. I was also a counseler at Camp KEEP Ocean this year and I volunteer at Mckinely Elementary school to help tutor students. You can rest assure you will always be able to count on me:)

…My recent work experience has been babysitting which validates my ability to multitask while remaining calm amid chaos… the 3 kids I watch are ADHD. I was also a counselor at Camp KEEP Ocean this year and I volunteer at McKinley Elementary school to help tutor students. I am dependable.

Just check your spelling….those little mistakes left uncorrected speak to your pride in workmanship and attention to detail…and errors in spelling give the impression of low intelligence.

  1. 2 Responses to “Tell me about yourself question how does this sound?”

  2. By rasvera on Sep 10, 2009 | Reply

    its really good :) you almost sound over qualified… i use to hold a bunch of interviews, so what you have is good, just make sure at the same time it is short enough to the point :)
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  3. By Beyond Mordant on Sep 11, 2009 | Reply

    …My recent work experience has been babysitting which validates my ability to multitask while remaining calm amid chaos… the 3 kids I watch are ADHD. I was also a counselor at Camp KEEP Ocean this year and I volunteer at McKinley Elementary school to help tutor students. I am dependable.

    Just check your spelling….those little mistakes left uncorrected speak to your pride in workmanship and attention to detail…and errors in spelling give the impression of low intelligence.
    References :
    University Career Counselor

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