Getting Married!  Whooooo!!!

does this sound interesting AT ALL to you?

i got a creativity surge not too long ago and i felt like writing. i wrote a couple pages then got really really into it so i kept writing. i wanna know what you think of this exerpt and if you like it, where could i post it so that other people may read it.
I think it falls under the Young Adult (teen) category so not all people will like it.

EXERPT CHAPTER ONE:
Kira opened her new laptop began to write an email to her uber-famous mother. She wrote:
KIRADEARA: Hey mom, how’s it going on the world tour? When are you going to be on the home stretch so that I can come and see you perform? Miss you & Love ya! Kira
Her mother was the lead singer of the bubble-gum-pop-group, Fly. Her mother never responded to any of the countless texts, IM’s, emails, and/or other messages and such that her loving and lonesome daughter sent her. When she was feeling lonely and bored she went into her “Besties” group on AOL and hit universal send. She was going to be sending an email to some of her very best friends in her elite Huntington Beach Private school.
KIRADEARA: Heey chix whats up 4 this weekend? I have mucho plans for or Friday nite!!! I also booked us 4 the Pacific Clubbers chocolate massage for 2.30 on Saturday. If you have plans, DITCH THEM!!!!

She knew she, the top of her group, would never have to be alone on the weekends because they knew that if left in solitude, Kira would not be a happy camper. Although she had never been to a camp other than her countless performing arts camps and one camp from a chef that was a big deal in France. She liked to call him Chef WeWeWe. Soon enough, although a lot faster than expected Kira received a message from her “Lady-in-waiting” Stella.
STELLABELLA: Bonjorno! Whatever u r doing I am doing this weekend! I am soo excited for our big plans of Friday! Choco massage soundss amazing! I already have a plan for my hosting of the weekly sleepover. We are also going to be swimming with the dolphins @ SEA WORLD! we get to get to swim with them DURING THE SHOW!!! Tell me if u think these plans are lame and I’ll make new ones. XOXO, Stella

Great, Kira thought to herself as she wrapped her bleach-blonde hair into a chingon, swimming with dolphins is really cool, and choco massages are lame… no one is allowed to upstage her. Instead of her usual tactic, which was to tell Stella that her plans were lame, she decided to let her do that with the girls and do something even better, but that something was gonna cost her a well-needed massage…

Kira was running through the house looking for Mercedes, her live-in housekeeper, she was nowhere to be seen when she was needed. So Kira reached into the top shelf of her “favorite things” cabinet in her kitchen. There she reached for some soy sauce for her favorite sushi that was stocked in the mini-fridge in her bedroom. Her Bedroom was decorated like every beach-dweller’s dream. The walls were decorated with pictures of the ocean, and her and her friends in each of their skimpiest bathing suits that all of their fathers hated. Every wall was painted baby blue with clouds that were painted on by a local artist. Her floor was tan and by her window was Sea Blue and led up to her 2nd bed, which was a day-bed that looked like a giant wave. Her room size was the size of a large-sized apartment. Although to her it was too small. It was 2:30 when Kira found Mercedes in the kitchen where, to Kira, she should always be. Not too long after finishing off her sushi, Kira got an IM from Stella….

Keep it going and I’m gonna add you as a friend so i can keep up with it… Thx